Students: Essay Tips

Lead or Hook.

Thesis statement. (At left it is underlined, but you don't have to underline it.)

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Point 3.

       When most students graduate from high school, they are tired of school.  They don’t want to go to school for four more years.  However, without a college degree, it is hard to get a good job. In my opinion, the purpose of college is to prepare you for a good career.  Cal Poly Pomona prepares you because it has many popular degree programs.  It also has many good teachers and a “learn by doing” philosophy.   

Topic Sentence about point 1.

Supporting details: facts, reasons, examples, arguments.

       The degree programs at Cal Poly lead directly into good jobs in industry.  For example, the Hotel and Restaurant Management program prepares students for a career in the hospitality industry.  The Electrical and Computer Engineering program is also popular in our high tech society.  (Add more)

Transitional phrase, topic sentence about point 2.

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       Another benefit at Cal Poly is the high quality faculty.  For example, my Engineering professor worked for many years in industry, and really knows what companies are looking for. (Add more)

Transitional phrase, topic sentence about point 3.

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       In addition, Cal Poly has a hands on, “learn by doing” teaching philosophy.  This means that students work on real projects with real materials, plants and animals.  For example . . . (Add more)

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Restatement of thesis.

       Choosing the right college or university can make a big difference in preparing you for a career.  Cal Poly Pomona is the right university for me because of its attractive degree programs, good teachers, and hands on teaching methods.  It might be the right choice for you too.