
Posted by Won Choi on June 07, 1999 at 15:13:31:
In Reply to: Writing Prompt #18 posted by Anna Chang on June 03, 1999 at 22:16:47:
Huddle did have a lot of details in his rendition of Michelle's story. Perhaps it was all made up, or he severely twisted it to suit his needs. I think the narration in the narration is a good way to tell her story, but if he had told if from Michelle's view it would have been better, I think.