Posted by chris miller on June 06, 1999 at 23:00:22:
In Reply to: writing prompt #18 posted by Brianna Lumsden on June 03, 1999 at 17:32:42:
It is possible that we would have perceived the story differently it Michelle told it. Michelle has a distinct way of doing things herself. What I like the most about her is that she is a shy and quiet character. Her way of squeezing into the dorms with out being noticed makes me a little curious. How is it that she is not noticed, I know that she is somewhat a loner but doesn't she have any friends?
Huddle used a great way of getting the readers attention. He first leads you to think that he is telling the story than he veers off to her version, much like what you said. It was a good change in this story. It became a little challenging trying to figure out what was going on though when the narration switched.