Posted by Melanie Maloski on June 03, 1999 at 19:35:26:
In Reply to: writing prompt #18 posted by Brianna Lumsden on June 03, 1999 at 17:32:42:
I think What Brianna has posted here is something good. After reading the post, I have realized that I left out a major part of how Huddle framed the story. I forgot to mention that the narrator suddenly becomes part of the story. What happens is that the story changes to thrid person. The reader then becomes familar with what goes on in The narrator's mind. I think this post is a good example of how Huddle framed his story.