©Zuoyue Wang, Cal Poly Pomona, zywang@csupomona.edu

Checklist of Tips on Writing History Papers

 

 

As we have discussed in class, one of our learning objectives is to improve our writing skills.  For that purpose, you are required to turn in a copy of this sheet when you turn in your essay exam or paper, with each of the following items circled to indicate to me that you have checked your paper according to these rules.

 

1. Place a period or comma before, not after, the closing quotation mark:

Wrong:             “This is the wrong way to place the closing quotation mark and the period or comma”.

Right:                “This is the right way.”

2. Page Numbers: Be sure to insert page numbers for every page of your paper, except for p. 1 if you use cover sheet.

3. Make sure that you distinguish between these words:

knew vs. new    know vs. now    there vs. their    where vs. were

it’s (“It’s a great paper.”) vs. its (“Its page numbers are missing.”)

to (“You have to revise this.”) vs. too (“You can never have too many revisions.”)          

4. Make sure that you italicize or underline book or journal/magazine titles; put “article titles” in quotes.

5. Use sections headings (bold, centered) if the paper is five pages or longer.

6. Use the following style for citations in footnotes—note the order of first and last names of the authors, the capitalization of book, article, and journal titles, the uses of commas and colons, and the absence of “volume” or “p.”  To insert a footnote in Word, go to “Insert” on the manual bar and select “Footnotes”:

For a book:

Anthony Brundage, Going to the Sources: A Guide to Historical Research and Writing (Wheeling, IL: Harlan Davidson, 1997), 56.

For an article in a journal:

Zuoyue Wang, "U.S.-China Scientific Exchange: A Case Study of State-Sponsored Scientific Internationalism during the Cold War and Beyond," Historical Studies in the Physical and Biological Sciences 30, pt. 1 (1999): 250.

For an article in an edited book:

William Kirby, "Engineering China: Birth of the Developmental State, 1928-1937," in Wen-Hsin Yeh (ed.), Becoming Chinese: Passages to Modernity and Beyond (Berkeley and Los Angeles: University of California Press, 2000), 140.

If you cite the same work again, give the author’s last name, main title of book or article, and page no.

7. Use the following style for bibliography—note the order of first and last names, the use of periods, and the hanging indentation (in Word, use Control + T; Control + Q to remove it):

Brundage, Anthony.  Going to the Sources: A Guide to Historical Research and Writing.  Wheeling, IL: Harlan Davidson, 1997.

Kirby, William.  "Engineering China: Birth of the Developmental State, 1928-1937."  In Becoming Chinese: Passages to Modernity and Beyond, edited by Wen-Hsin Yeh.  Berkeley and Los Angeles: University of California Press, 2000.

Wang, Zuoyue.  "U.S.-China Scientific Exchange: A Case Study of State-Sponsored Scientific Internationalism during the Cold War and Beyond."  Historical Studies in the Physical and Biological Sciences 30, pt. 1 (1999): 249-277.

8. Use the following style for in-text citations in combination with a bibliography: (Brundage, 55).

9. Plagiarism: Avoid copying other authors’ words without citations; avoid long quotes.

10. If you have any questions regarding the writing process, discuss them with me.