Scenario: Suppose you work in the Economic Development
Department of Chimona, a young, prospering, medium sized city.
Chimona is the largest city in Chimona Unified School District (CUSD) a
school district that also includes several other medium-sized cities and
a half dozen small cities. Your boss, Mr. Overo Reacta, has
just returned from hosting a group of executives from the Hugemontica Computer
Corp., which is considering moving its headquarter to Chimona. He
says it took only 30 minutes to satisfy the executives that the city's
infrastructure could satisfy their production needs, and that they would
be well positioned for auto and air transportation networks.
Their next questions were about what the local area could offer them
and their families as residents. Mr. Reacta impressed
them with detail about the parks and other amenities and the high
test score averages in the local schools. When they asked about school
security, however, he had no details, and couldn't answer their questions.
He gives you this assignment:
Tasks:
B: A very good paper that is weak in some aspects, such as not thoroughly addressing the assignment; it is not as clearly organized in thought and compositions as the superior paper. While it has been checked for mechanical errors, there are some inconsistencies which may detract from the quality of the paper.
C: A good paper that is an adequate or satisfactory response, but it is weaker than the very good or superior paper in several ways. For example, it may not clearly support with example(s) statements that are made. This paper is marred by "awkward" or grammar, mechanical errors, and poor word use.
D: A minimally acceptable paper. It barely addresses the assignment. The writing is less than competent and shows problems in several areas. The paper, however, is strong enough to earn a passing grade.
F: A failing paper. There is very little understanding of the assignment. It has major deficiencies in organization, development, sentence/section structure, word choice, grammar, and/or mechanics.
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