Writing Tips

Tip 1: The Thesis

Make sure you have a good, clear thesis. This is a statement that appears very early in the essay and summarizes what point you are going to make. The more thoughtful, the better.

Weak: Ernesto Galarza wrote Barrio Boy for many reasons.

Better: Ernesto Galarza wrote Barrio Boy in order to bring attention to the racist practices of the government.

Best: Ernesto Galarza wrote Barrio Boy in order to bring attention to the racist practices of the government. He hopes, perhaps, to rally the support of the American people so that the behavior of the authorities can be changed for the better.

Tip 2: The Evidence

It is also best to make sure that every paragraph has a sentence that links the paragraph back to the thesis. For example, "One incident that Galarza discusses that is designed to illustrate the racism of government authorities is..."

All of the evidence you present, particularly in a short paper, should be clearly and directly tied to your argument in this way. Avoid unnecessary summarization of the reading. You may assume I have read the reading.

Tip 3: Mechanics

Mechanics are important. Not only is a well-written, error-free paper easier to read, it also sends the message that you tried to do your best on the assignment.

Keep a particular eye out for very fixable mistakes like errors of fact, spelling errors, etc.

Tip 4: Creativity

Finding a thoughtful and unique way to approach the material is good. You might, for example, bring your own experience into your discussion. Your professors are grading many assignments, and you want to set yourself apart from the pack.

Tip 5: Intimidation

Your essay writing should not be much different than your conversational style. Avoid trying to make your prose sound fancy just because you happen to be writing an essay. In particular, avoid dramatic but empty generalizations. For example: "Ernesto locquaciously advises us that his pride in his Latin heritage is undimmed by the massive upheaval his family went through, and he knows he will unreservedly and fortitudinously persevere."